feedback of roughcut

When asking what the strengths of our rough cut were, the feedback we got was:

• The variety of shots

• The continuity of the editing flowed well

• It makes sense

• The shots were good quality

When asked what the weaknesses were:

• More editing needs to be done on the narrative

• The lighting is a bit low

• The attic scene looked quite dark

• wasn't always cut on the beat

What meanings did they gain from watching the video:

• Love story

• Teenage love

• Past

• Memorys

Suggestions:

• use more of the narrative to strengthen the story

• more narrative

• cleaner cuts

• more performance

When encoding our video ie: making our storyboard we encoded certain messages and themes to our narrative, ie: a teenage lovestory. from the feedback we recieved we can see our audience's easily decoded these messages within our video.

Making of video

This is a video we put together using the footage of us on set.