What do you think the basic plot of this thriller is?
- plum o'keefe - a tv show about people who are voted in through hatred challenging to kill eachother
- Izzy Macloud - like the hunger games, TV program about people at the bottom of society killing eachother
- Mina Hambro - a gameshow where bad people kill each other
- Liza ietukhova - Story about people who took part in a show. very good.
What do you think are the key strengths of this thriller and why?
- Plum O'keefe - Music and characters
- Izzy Macloudm - the bit with the presenter walking down the stairs and the bit with the gun is good.
- Mina Hambro - The writing explaining the characters when they talk about how they feel
- Liza Ieutukhova - Interesting plot. editing. Intrigues audience.
How do you think this thriller could be made more effective and why?
- Less lens flare around sunshines speech
- Have a better presenter voiceover, more titles to make it feel like an opening?
- Bloood when guy dies. An audience?
- It could be less funny, if the aim was to make a thriller. More serious
My feedback
I think that the comments made on our thriller have been mainly positive. We were worried that a lot of people wouldn't understand the concept of the film but in the comments everyone said they knew what was going on. The negative feedback is mainly things that we could have improved with more time. Sunshines voice ended up a bit fuzzy and this was impossible to fix so I understand why there are some comments about that.
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